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Continuous Writing – Money

I just had my graduation last month but it played back in my head as if it was just yesterday as I just received a job in the JYP company as their accountant. I worked enthusiastically since that was my very first career. At the end of the month, when I received my pay, I met the most perfect creature in the world. His appealing aroma was the first to grab my attention as his scent diffused through my nostrils, making the¬†hairs behind my neck stood upright. Continue reading “Continuous Writing – Money”

Continuous Writing

This was written when we had a test but I had made some amendments.


 

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I looked at its face and my heart melted. The bright white lights just blinded my eyes a few seconds before but what was in my arms shone brighter than the brightest stars in the sky. He was my little man. Without realising, droplets of water had already ran down my rosy cheeks like a waterfall. The excruciating pain from before faded away as I adored the small features on my baby. He was gorgeous and it felt like just the two of us there levitating in mid-air. Continue reading “Continuous Writing”

Continuous Writing

Another SPM tips for writing essays is incorporating your essays with what you had already knew and learnt. For example, use the facts and uncommon words you learnt in Chemistry, Biology, Science, Physics and many more.This is a good practice because you can write good essays as well as practicing what you had learnt. In this case, I used the facts from History and interpreted it into a story with a touch of Biology and Science. Let’s see how it’s put together. ūüėÄ Continue reading “Continuous Writing”

Continuous writing

Here is our very own Ainul Afifi’s masterpiece which she wrote during the Mid-Year examinations ūüėÄ Enjoy~

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Another sample essay!! – Continuous writing

Ainul Afifi’s trial exam essay. 48/50.

 

One shot. Two shots. No, three shots. I could feel a knife-piercing excruciating pain in my forehead. Amidst the ambiguity, I heard terse voices with heavy breaths..

“I command you to shoot her till she’s dead!”

“All eyes on her, she’s retaliating!”

“Impostor! Traitor to the government!”

Through my impaired memory, I could subliminally recall the face of a terrifying Taliban climbing onto the school bus..

“Who is Malala Yousafzai?”

So I boldly raised my hand-and that was when they shot me. Continue reading “Another sample essay!! – Continuous writing”

Friends or “Friends”?

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The wind was gentle but chilly in the midst of the night. Reynold, Beca, Skylar and I were doing absolutely nothing! We had just finished the Harry Potter movie marathon and now we were feeling completely at lost. I was just about to doze off when Reynold suddenly shouted “I’ve got an idea!”. Feeling suddenly energized, I asked him what it was. “Let’s go to the house on 24th street!” said Reynold all excited. Our jaws dropped as soon as we heard his supposed-to-be great idea. Everyone knew the house on 24th street but no one Continue reading “Friends or “Friends”?”

Descriptive essay

He possesses the facial features of an angel. His eyes are hazel brown and his eyelashes are long and heavy. His eyebrows thick and black, they look like the eyebrows of a famous Japanese cartoon character called Shin Chan. A jawline as sharp as a razor is one of the best facial features that he owns. His looks are not the only thing that made me drawn to him like iron pins attracted to a magnet. He happens to be the school’s athlete and performed very well in his academics. Adam is an eye candy and every girl in school wished he was their’s.

Last Friday evening, I sat on one of the benches nearby the school’s track just to get some fresh air. Suddenly, I caught a glimpse of heaven. It was Adam. I locked my eyes on him from afar as he was jogging. He looked pale and sweaty as he worked his leg muscles as quick as lightning. I thought that maybe he could be Usain Bolt’s replacement in the future. I decided to buy him a bottle of water as he walked towards the bench that I was sitting.

“Here,” I said, handing him a bottle of Spritzer mineral water.

“Thanks. You’re Chanel, aren’t you?” he asked, as he flashed a smile that lighted my whole world.

“That’s right,” I answered him, and smiled as I could not help myself. “I should go now, it’s getting really late. See you later, Adam.”

“Bye Chanel.” he said as we go our separate ways back home.

“That was the only conversation I had with Adam.” I told Katy as she looked at me and listened to everything I said about Adam. Katy flashed her sweetest smile and told me that it is not abnormal to be head over heels for a guy in our age.

“We are teenagers growing up and we make countless mistakes, right?” She says.

“Right.” I agreed and continued to munch on my lunch. The school’s cafeteria was getting really loud, it was starting to get on our nerves. ¬†We quickened on finishing up our meal so we can leave. Just as I wiped my mouth with a napkin, I felt a touch on my shoulder. I turned my head 45 degrees and looked. It was Coby, Adam’s bestfriend. “This is a really odd thing for Coby to do.” I thought.

“It’s Adam. He wants to see you and he’s in the hospital,” Coby said, panting as he looked at me in the eye. He looked worried.

“Come with me.” he added.

I instantly got up, followed Coby out of the cafeteria and walked quickly to his car. As I got into his car, he started the engine and drove off. We were heading to the St Patrick’s Hospital which was located a few kilometres away from school. My heart was racing and my mind was ¬†filled with questions about Adam. What happened to him? Is he all right? Did Adam fall sick? It was just last week when I last saw him..

“We’re here.” Coby said.

I followed him heading to Adam’s room. When we were there, Coby insisted on staying outside while I go and see Adam. I twisted the doorknob slowly so I would not make any noise. As I entered the room, my mind went crazy on what to say to Adam. We have never talked much and what was there to say? ¬†When I saw him, I was aghast. His legs were straightly laid on bed and his right leg was wrapped with a bandage. He also had a broken arm. He looked really bad as if he was suffering from a serious disease. As I walked closer to him, he opened his eyes and looked at me. He contracted his facial muscles and smiled. Despite his condition, his smile still made my heart skip a beat.

“Hey,” I said softly.

“Hey,” he murmured. “I’m sorry I look appalling. I was involved in an accident yesterday,” he continued weakly. “I just wanted to thank you again. You know, for that drink after my training.”

“Oh it’s no big deal, really.” I told him.

“Could you keep me company here today? Coby’s out to get some food.” He asked.

My eyes widened. This was a golden ticket to get to know Adam better. There was no way I would reject this once in a lifetime opportunity.

“Sure.” I said, keeping it simple and nice, hiding my excitement inside. I imagined fireworks continuously playing in my head. Adam’s condition was terrifying. There were still blood stains on his white shirt. Despite that, his smile is still contagious that it makes tears roll down my cheeks as it has always been, his laugh still lightens up my day¬†and his presence still makes my heart race faster than a racing car.

Technology – Good or Evil? [factual essay]

Technology – Good or Evil?

 

¬† ¬† ¬† ¬† ¬† ¬† ¬†Technological advancements are reshaping the world drastically and play a pivotal role in transforming the human society. Looking at the environment filled with modern technologies that intertwined with our lives today makes me wonder as to what extent technology may evolve further in the future? Would it lead to good or evil? Before I proceed any further, we have to look on both sides of the coin. There is always good and evil on both sides. We have to always apply some moderations on any endeavor without going overboard as it may lead to serious repercussions in the future. Continue reading “Technology – Good or Evil? [factual essay]”

Continuous Writing [Smartphones]

*this essay has been marked and graded A (45/50) by the teacher*

¬† ¬† ¬† ¬† ¬† ¬† ¬†The marvels of science and technology has led us to a very important discovery: smartphones. In fact, the invention of smartphones could possibly be the most important discovery in the century. Aside from other gadgets, smartphones are definitely the talk of the town by many technology and gadget fans alike. So how did it all begin? There was a time when a university drop-out thought it would be a great idea to combine all possible items including watch, a PDA, a hand phone and a camera¬†into one easy, portable hand- Continue reading “Continuous Writing [Smartphones]”

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